Watercolour Painting Feedback and Advice - Grass and People

Caroline has sent me her watercolour painting of Hambeldon Mill and has asked for my feedback.This is a good painting and Caroline has followed my instructions very well. There are a couple of small points that stand out, first of all the two little people look as though they are wadding in the water instead of being on the pathway, see inset blow up. Secondly the grasses in the foreground are rather regimented and could have done with being a little more random. I love the sky as which is a difficult technique, so very well done.If you would like to try this watercolour course, click here.